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Submitted: January 6, 2012
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A portrait drawing of Rihanna I'v made and Its not that good .

I wanted to try this time to use colored pencils In a portrait and made alot of mistakes that needed to be fixed and that was really hard to fix.

The drawing was done with a mech pencil 0.5mm 2b
and STAEDTLER colored pencils.

well.... does It iven look like her ? ><"

I will be really pleased If you gave me some critique.

Critique by ~DavidLazzuri Apr 10, 2012, 12:10:53 PM

i love this work...!!!! the only critics can i make is , try to fix the lips and teeth the size is ok but the form is a little big on the right side ...look the picture on a mirror and you will see what i say, try this technique with all your work and you´ll see what have you make wrong.... but the work is awsome, the color is so beautiful too , go ahead, never give up even when the people say your work is not ok continue in that way practice practice and practice. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . the practice become in a great master

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Critique by ~Alb-Echelon Jan 7, 2012, 6:57:06 AM

(first time I'm doing this)

I think you've done an outstanding work with the lips and eyes. You've managed to deliver the form and material perfectly.
Great capturing of the light in the eye and the barely noticeable eye bag.
Beautiful job on the lips! the colors are amazing and details seem to be you strongest point.
Now about the critique I would say that you have neglected the hair a little. It would have been more in the nature of the drawing if you had payed more attention to the hair and given it a more soft and silky feeling.
And also the skin could have used more richness in colors.

Ok so that's just my opinion don't kill me.

I don't even know if I'm in the position to write a critique about your work 'cause you're much more talented than me. Just thought I'd try once...